March 9, 2009

New Story

Heres my new story so far, I’m not done though! I decided to make a new story because I didnt like my other one…. *Please Comment!

A adventurous trip to Cabo San Lucas, Mexico!
By,
Alexa Rodriguez

“TRISTAN”, exclaims mom! “Are you packed, our plane leaves in 30 minutes! “Coming I called”. Gosh, mom can be demanding at times. I mean, I’m only 12, and she expects me to be packed, showered, and decent looking, for a trip that I don’t even want to go to. I understand we have to be ready for the plane, but seriously, she could have scheduled a later one. Mom stomps into my room, “ Tristan we have to go!” Okay, okay, I’m ready, I scream! Well, we finally got in the car, A little late which worried mom. Oh, and if you’re wondering why dad’s not coming is because my parents got divorced a year ago. Yes, it was a little hard on me, but I understand it was the best for them.” Mom, calm down we are only 10 minutes behind schedule”.  We finally arrived to the airport, and mom was freaking out, STILL! I told her I would meet her on the plane while, she checked the luggage. The plane was farther than I thought, and seeing all those food stands made me hungry. “ Oh well,” I sighed. I finally, got to the plane and found two empty seats. I waited for about 10 minutes, until the pilot said everyone buckle your seat belts. “OH NO,” I thought. “ MOM, she is not here yet”! I screamed, “ NO, don’t leave my mom is …” It was too late the plane had taken off.
I sat in agony, thinking of all the things that could happen to me on a vacation alone, then I found there were some plus side, but too many negative sides to balance them out. All of a sudden we heard a loud BOOM…..” The pilot, and co pilot were on the ground with blood over their bodies. “Whoa” I said, “What happened”! I found out that the engine had given up, and the loud boom, was because we had landed, but not at our destination,in Cabo San Lucas, Mexico. I started crying because I just couldn’t take it anymore, I said to myself,” Don’t worry Tristan you will be fine, You will get on the next plane back home, and everything will be Fine. Wow fine was a word I haven’t heard in a while. The sound of fine made me feel good. Good, There’s another word that was soothing, Maybe this trip isn’t going to be so bad after all.

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